Saturday, July 19, 2008

Blooper #1

ok, so here's a blooper that Flick and I wrote agess ago when we were going crazy.
I think it actually started when Flick said we should include the line "oh snap" in there, and also the line "your face!".
so it was decided that we should write a blooper of one of the scenes..
this particular scene was the dream that Erika has...
btw: this scene is best read aloud and in a suspenseful, fortuneteller sorta voice :P
enjoy!

"There was something that told me I was not alone. I whirled around.
'Looking for someone?' said a dark voice. I couldn't see who or what had said it, but I knew it was nothing of this world.
'Your face!' was my reply. I hadn't meant to say it, but my body seemed to be beyond my control. There was silence then; as if the thing were trying to think up a witty retort. Then finally the silence was broken.
'Oh snap...'"

so yar. thats only a snippet of the original dream sequence.. but we thought it'd be too long to create a completely alternative one.
any thoughts?

2 comments:

Flick said...

where's the suspense girl???

I remeber how long we laughed at the sentance "I whirled around" lulz whirled

priscilla said...

LOL

that was reaaally good XD.

i don't like first person tho. aiyaa